Progress on music magazine - photos (2)

When taking my photos, I took a photo which I thought I was going to use. However when analysing the photo I think it looks like it is obvious that it has been posed for. Also my sister (the model) looks to happy for the genre of the magazine. Below is an image of the original photo. The bottom photo is the image I will be using on my front cover, I chose this photo as it looks like it is grabbed from a concert and the facial expressions are good.